SUMMARY:
This week I formulated my news story scripts. I originally cut up the pieces to highlight how the stories would flow with the imagery. The newsroom editor highlighted the need to drive a story with images. For example stating health statistics would not gain the viewers attention, but graphics of houses with percentages of interest rates and arrows going up and down can help tell the story. This week I attended Tara Brown's funeral and originally my approach to the story was unemotional and it relied solely on facts, however, with some editing the story had more colour and creativity, capturing the viewers attention.
EVIDENCE:
[Notes:gc-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 42:32:02 crowd heading into church]
Nearly 1000 family members and friends attended a funeral service for Gold Coast mum Tara Brown today.
[Notes:gc-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 40:50:02 parents at funeral]
The service was held at the Southport Church of Christ at around 10 am this morning.
[Notes:g-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 37:30:07 rest in love shirts]
Some loved ones were wearing white ribbons, while others had custom designed shirts saying 'rest in love Tara'.
[Notes:g-fc-tarafuneral-17-0004 07:54:20 carrying coffin at funeral]
She was carried out of the service in a white casket covered in flowers.
[Notes:g-taradeath-ovl 00:06:22 montage of accident]
The 24 year old mother was allegedly brutally beaten to death after being run off of the road by her ex-partner.
It's also alleged Lionel Patea beat Ms Brown with a fire hydrant when she was trapped in the car.
The former bikie appeared in Southport Magistrates Court via video link on Wednesday where he was charged with her murder.
[Notes:gc-fc-tarabrownvigil4-11-0002 02:01:11 flowers at vigil]
Just last week friends and family attended the scene of the accident in Molendinar laying flowers in tribute of Ms Brown.
She was laid to rest at a Southport Cemetery.
Caitlan Gallagher - 9 News
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EDITED:
[Notes:gc-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 42:32:02 crowd heading into church]
EVIDENCE:
[Notes:gc-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 42:32:02 crowd heading into church]
Nearly 1000 family members and friends attended a funeral service for Gold Coast mum Tara Brown today.
[Notes:gc-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 40:50:02 parents at funeral]
The service was held at the Southport Church of Christ at around 10 am this morning.
[Notes:g-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 37:30:07 rest in love shirts]
Some loved ones were wearing white ribbons, while others had custom designed shirts saying 'rest in love Tara'.
[Notes:g-fc-tarafuneral-17-0004 07:54:20 carrying coffin at funeral]
She was carried out of the service in a white casket covered in flowers.
[Notes:g-taradeath-ovl 00:06:22 montage of accident]
The 24 year old mother was allegedly brutally beaten to death after being run off of the road by her ex-partner.
It's also alleged Lionel Patea beat Ms Brown with a fire hydrant when she was trapped in the car.
The former bikie appeared in Southport Magistrates Court via video link on Wednesday where he was charged with her murder.
[Notes:gc-fc-tarabrownvigil4-11-0002 02:01:11 flowers at vigil]
Just last week friends and family attended the scene of the accident in Molendinar laying flowers in tribute of Ms Brown.
She was laid to rest at a Southport Cemetery.
Caitlan Gallagher - 9 News
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EDITED:
[Notes:gc-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 42:32:02 crowd heading into church]
Tara Brown will 'rest in love' according to her family and friends as they said goodbye to the Gold Coast mother today.
[Notes:g-taradeath-ovl 00:06:22 montage of accident]
She tragically passed away after allegedly being beaten to death by her ex-partner Lionel Patea, who was charged with her murder.
[Notes:gc-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 40:50:02 parents at funeral]
The service began with tender embraces as thousands gathered at the Southport Church of Christ.
[Notes:g-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 37:30:07 rest in love shirts]
Custom made shirts and white ribbons were worn in tribute to the 24 year old.
[Notes:g-fc-tarafuneral-17-0004 07:54:20 carrying coffin at funeral]
During the service a family friend said Tara's mother had shown strength through the ordeal.
[Notes:gc-fc-tarabrownvigil4-11-0002 02:01:11 flowers at vigil]
Just last week family and friends gathered at the site of the incident in Molendinar to pay respects to the young mum.
[Notes:g-taradeath-ovl 00:06:22 montage of accident]
She tragically passed away after allegedly being beaten to death by her ex-partner Lionel Patea, who was charged with her murder.
[Notes:gc-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 40:50:02 parents at funeral]
The service began with tender embraces as thousands gathered at the Southport Church of Christ.
[Notes:g-fc-tarafuneral2-17-0002 37:30:07 rest in love shirts]
Custom made shirts and white ribbons were worn in tribute to the 24 year old.
[Notes:g-fc-tarafuneral-17-0004 07:54:20 carrying coffin at funeral]
During the service a family friend said Tara's mother had shown strength through the ordeal.
[Notes:gc-fc-tarabrownvigil4-11-0002 02:01:11 flowers at vigil]
Just last week family and friends gathered at the site of the incident in Molendinar to pay respects to the young mum.
Caitlan Gallagher - Nine News
ENDS.
SOCIAL MEDIA:
Caitlan Gallagher @Caitycakes1201 Sep 24
Rest in love... A message for Tara Brown at today's funeral...

10:28 AM - 24 Sep 2015 · Details
Caitlan Gallagher retweeted
Dominique Loudon @dominiqueloudon Sep 24
Love it when your boss @rewopdor makes your story! Nine renews Titans sponsorship for 2 more years @9NewsGoldCoast
ENDS.
SOCIAL MEDIA:
Caitlan Gallagher @Caitycakes1201 Sep 24Rest in love... A message for Tara Brown at today's funeral...

10:28 AM - 24 Sep 2015 · Details
Caitlan Gallagher retweeted
Dominique Loudon @dominiqueloudon Sep 24Love it when your boss @rewopdor makes your story! Nine renews Titans sponsorship for 2 more years @9NewsGoldCoast

